Revised Conclusion

This posts includes my newly revised conclusion along with an explanation of how I approached my revisions.

1. Original Project 2 draft
2. Project 2 draft with new conclusion.

I approached re-writing my conclusion by looking forward into the future of gene editing and circling back to the metaphor I used comparing designer babies to designing a rhetorical analysis. I am still not pleased with this conclusion because the ideas sound choppy. The main point I tried to convey in my conclusion is Stockton's use of rhetorical strategies in his article is a successful way of conveying his argument. 

Logan. "You've finally reached it!" 23 Aug. 2010 via CommonsHelper.  Public Domain EWikist.