Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2

In this post is a link that directs you to a copy of my draft where I analyzed the paragraphs. In each paragraph I looked at the following points:

• focuses on the main point
• develops the main point
• organization
• links ideas
• smooth transitons. 

Here is the link for the Copy for Paragraph Analysis 2. 

Glacial-Overfreeze. "Peace Sign ove Sunset." 1 Mar 2010 via Diviant Art. Creative Commons.